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Fox

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Hatchet!
« on: December 02, 2007, 01:24:00 PM »

This one was done with markers. (save for his belly and tail)

Because he's cute with his little catnip mouse. <3

Any errors on this one were made because 1: I'm still having trouble focussing and 2: My hands are kind shakey for some reason.
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Faith

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Re: Hatchet!
« Reply #1 on: December 02, 2007, 08:12:00 PM »

Heh...   :D
Nice!

What's Hatchet from? And... what is he?

Would you mind some suggestions, though?
I know that you were kinda out there, no matter... so it's completely understood.
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Fox

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Re: Hatchet!
« Reply #2 on: December 03, 2007, 07:36:00 AM »

Star Wars - Nexu.

Unless I have a reference, I can't seem to get the cat-laying-down just right; so any suggestions would be rather helpful.
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Faith

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Re: Hatchet!
« Reply #3 on: December 03, 2007, 09:26:00 PM »

All right, then.

It looks like his chest is his shoulder... or, his upper arm disappears.
I'd say you tried to angle it to where the chest would appear in front of the arm, which might have been okay, but you made the arm too small, for that, so that it disappeared, it's an overview, so it' kinda confusing, and the chest would have to be extremely narrow for that to work... then the creature's body would have to kinda cave in, for the arms to make sense... which, really, wouldn't make much sense... to me. I would have, personally, put the arm in front of the chest, enlarged it, and moved it back, some.

Do you understand what I'm saying?

It's just around the chest/shoulder area, that I see as any big flaw, or anything... the rest is really good.   ;)
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