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Author Topic: In a child's eyes....  (Read 3017 times)

allicat

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In a child's eyes....
« on: March 18, 2008, 05:11:00 PM »

Hahaha!   8)   Yep, I put it on here!   ;)

In A Child's Eyes...

What does she see within those eyes?
When she sees this world, what does it mean?
So much to look for, & so much to keep...
In her eyes. Nobody dies, and nobody lies
Because she is innocent,
and nobody dies in a child's eyes
And no matter what people say,
there is no such thing as a lie
And everyone just goes on living,
and nothing ever ends
Everything just goes on forever
In a child's eyes, in her eyes
Pain may fall upon you and your aching heart
And when you look out the window during the storm
you see the darkness and feel the cold
But to her there is only the rain, and a simple game
That will last with the wind's song of eternity
And move on even when she is gone
To the next child full of youth, full of truth
And forever the rain will come, and a child will play...

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allicat

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Re: In a child's eyes....
« Reply #1 on: March 18, 2008, 05:15:00 PM »

This was from Kitkat, not me. She posted it from my site, so it says it's mine. III diiiiiidd noooot wriiiiiittttee thiiiiiis. (She didn't either. Someone you all know did....)
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Faith

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Re: In a child's eyes....
« Reply #2 on: March 18, 2008, 07:54:00 PM »

How about you post something you wrote, Kitkat?
Like:
"T7 h5 gHW 7A Ur zjo ,u ms,r od lsy jpw are upi tpdau"

Translation:
Hi, my name is <name> hi my name is <name> how are you today?

Complete with repetition, and, might I add, lack of capitals... or punctuation, for that matter.   :P
But, hey, not bad for having your eyes closed... you even got one whole word right.   ;D

Hey, everyone, try to write something with your eyes closed!
(Don't even look at where you put your hands down... this might not make a difference to those who know really well, where all the keys are... but, as is shown by the example, above, it can.)
(Oh, and include translations, please, if you would.) ^_^

Oh, and this whole thing came about when Kitkat said that she'd be able to type, even if she was blind, for those who are curious... I convinced her to try...   :D
Yeah, we talk about weird things, here...   ;D

(Yes, this was said with permission.)


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Dragyn

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Re: In a child's eyes....
« Reply #3 on: March 19, 2008, 11:22:00 AM »

I am writing with my eyes closed.  How do you feel now?

Translation:  I am writing with my eyes closed.  How do you feel now?


You told me to.

Anyway, interesting piece of poetry you've posted.  Now, just to figure out what it means...

It's well written, regardless.
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Faith

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Re: In a child's eyes....
« Reply #4 on: March 19, 2008, 03:44:00 PM »

Heh...   :D

I expected as much, from you...   ;D
I was thinking mainly of you, when I said the, "It may not make a difference, to those who know really well where all the keys are..." bit.

My etes are closed.
My eyes are closed.
Hm... one error... surprising, considering the fact that I can barely type with my eyes open... but, that was a short sentence, anyway.   :P  
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kitkat

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Re: In a child's eyes....
« Reply #5 on: March 21, 2008, 12:11:00 AM »

again, sorry to list under allicat's sit, I have learmed ,u ;esspm tjigj....
hahahaha! ok, translation: again, sorry to list under allicat's site, I have learned my lesson......
I did ok til I made a mistake and had to backspace. That threw me all out of whack! haha Still, better than my last attemp....
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Faith

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Re: In a child's eyes....
« Reply #6 on: March 21, 2008, 11:33:00 AM »

Heh...   ;D

Keep trying.   ;)
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Dragyn

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Re: In a child's eyes....
« Reply #7 on: March 24, 2008, 02:20:00 PM »

You're enjoying this, aren't you, Faith...

Don't worry too much about posting from someone else's, as long as you don't too it too often, or on purpose.
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Faith

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Re: In a child's eyes....
« Reply #8 on: March 24, 2008, 03:28:00 PM »

Hehehe...   ;D

Yeah, and I've only ever tried once, myself...   :P
Not too succesfully, either. >.<

But Kitkat seems to be improving.
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