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Title: The story of Kheros
Post by: Dragyn on August 17, 2008, 09:12:00 AM
Nobody's put anything in here for a while, so...

Kheros' Backstory. (http://beastling.xepher.net/PE/KherosBackstory.php)

A link!  You may click it if you wish.

Comments? Questions? Random bouts of nonsense?
Title: Re: The story of Kheros
Post by: Fox on August 17, 2008, 04:16:00 PM
Wow. I don't really have much to say other than....

That makes things a lot more interesting. o_o
Title: Re: The story of Kheros
Post by: Faith on August 20, 2008, 05:12:00 PM

Heh... I've a similar response, however, I've both questions and comments to add to it.
Sadly, I don't think I can ask most of those questions with much success, as far as answers are concerned...   :P
Like, who was the creature that wanted to kill him, and why... also, what were the words on the tombstone, before, "Long gone, long forgotten." And... well...
I best not waste too much text.   :P

It's really well written.   ;)
Have you ever considered writing anything other than comics?

I might add a bit of advice, but perhaps only because I personally try to avoid doing this thing when I write... people don't tend to mind when they're reading, though.
In either case, it kinda petered out towards the end, probably while you were getting more into the writing and words.

'Twas a good starting.
I liked how it worked into the plot, though now I wish I knew where the plot went, from here. '=J
Title: Re: The story of Kheros
Post by: Dragyn on August 21, 2008, 07:59:00 AM
That's part of why it, as you said it, 'petered out;' I'm letting you know where Kheros came from, but I'm not telling the tale of PE...that's what the comic is for.

The monster is the monster.

Uh...like it said, there weren't any words there before "Long gone, Long forgotten."

I do write stuff other than comics, I just don't usually post them anywhere.
Title: Re: The story of Kheros
Post by: Faith on August 21, 2008, 09:21:00 PM
Oops...
I spaced. >.<
I knew that, but I managed to space it anyway...

No, not that.
It's just something about the way you wrote it.
It wasn't bad, I just try to avoid it when I write.

Hm...
You should.

Title: Re: The story of Kheros
Post by: Dragyn on August 22, 2008, 10:21:00 AM
Nah.
Title: Re: The story of Kheros
Post by: Faith on August 22, 2008, 06:52:00 PM
And why not?
Title: Re: The story of Kheros
Post by: Dragyn on August 23, 2008, 12:45:00 PM
...

(That's an elipsis.)
Title: Re: The story of Kheros
Post by: Faith on August 24, 2008, 09:33:00 PM
Heh.   :P

Either way, I suppose, it's up to you.
(Trying to respond, but not very good at it, seeing as I'm so sleepy... >.< )
Title: Re: The story of Kheros
Post by: bloodreaper on August 25, 2008, 03:58:00 PM
You are aware that it's okay to leave a thread without replying to it, right?
Title: Re: The story of Kheros
Post by: Fox on August 25, 2008, 04:07:00 PM
*looks at her post count*

......

Really?
Title: Re: The story of Kheros
Post by: Faith on August 25, 2008, 07:27:00 PM
Wait... who's' post count? O.o ':D

*Snrk.*
Yeah, but if I do that the thread's more likely to die. It often does, anyway... but this way it's less likely. *Shrugs* It worked this time.   :)

Oo... it's really raining, here.   ;D
What do ya'll usually do when it rains?

How many people here write, often?

Hey, Dragyn, do you think you'll make any more backstories for your characters?
You said you might, for Thief, once.
Title: Re: The story of Kheros
Post by: Dragyn on August 26, 2008, 05:23:00 AM
Maybe.  I don't really know.  I suspect some of these characters will end up getting their own backstory eventually, though most will probably have to wait until after PE finishes...
Title: Re: The story of Kheros
Post by: Faith on August 26, 2008, 10:36:00 PM
Hey, maybe you could make a link devoted to backstories?
It could be another one of the moons, or something, to add to the little scene, up top.
But, heh... that might be adding a bit much to your to-do list. ':D
Title: Re: The story of Kheros
Post by: Dragyn on August 27, 2008, 07:50:00 AM
I assumed backstories would be placed under their picture on the cast page, like I did with Kheros'.
Title: Re: The story of Kheros
Post by: Faith on August 27, 2008, 10:47:00 AM
Okay, that's a good idea.
I just like making pictures, so another moon seemed neat. ':D